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olemeloART t1_ixcne66 wrote

The main tell is how parts of the image that are supposed to be on different layers and conceptually separate are "gooey" and melting into one another. Also there are bits of weird random garbage. Like some tiny shadowy figure inside the sun. Birds that don't look like birds. Tiny "hair"-like stuff sticking out of things. Garbled type. Etc. All of this needs to be cleaned up for it to be considered finished work. But the composition is good, the image is powerful and conveys a message (if a little blunt). The piece has good "bones" (heh), just needs finishing touches.

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