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Booblicle t1_ixenubu wrote

I understand that a lot of reddit is about being praise worthy. But to learn, you need critique. And as such it is not meant to be an insult. And at the end of the day if you're satisfied with the photography, that's all that matters.

Tones are ok but I think focus needs to be worked on. It feels as though a proper camera/lens was not used. Oddly, it has grain which wouldn't be bad normally. Here instead, it suggests a lighting/exposure problem. But it could also be a lack of proper digital editing.

Something else, at least to myself make this feel lacking. But I'm unable to place what that thing is precisely particularly without taking a second look. I think maybe the focus point is too centered. Much like a bullseye. Perhaps that was what you was going for though.

I believe there may be too much negative space as well, or at least balanced

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eyegasm_jpeg OP t1_ixepysg wrote

Thanks! Its very good what you said. the grain here is digital (these are laboratory budget scans, but the noritsu scanner can do better. I scanned the first frame in high resolution on a Nikon - everything is much better there). I have no complaints about the exposure meter. I agree that somewhere the composition, light, focus, depth of field are wrong. but I must say that all 36 frames were improvisation, without preparation and idea.

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eyegasm_jpeg OP t1_ixeqi0i wrote

Minolta X-700, Rokkor-x 50mm f/1.4, Fujifilm Superia X-tra 400 135

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cashibonite t1_ixfp0jb wrote

Why is this orange sitting on this strangely erotic table?

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Okay_Screensaver t1_ixfpjn8 wrote

Not bad, but I think a slightly farther out perspective would help. It feels a little weird seeing only part of the limbs and having them cut off. The orange would do better if it were more offset from the center.

The form is really nice though, it’s really close to being a great photograph with some slight camera composition changes

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samnrflt t1_ixfun2x wrote

I’m Petty sure that’s not how you eat an orange, but I could be wrong

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[deleted] t1_ixg1qsp wrote

For a nanosecond I had the ends reversed

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ObjectiveCorgi9898 t1_ixh34u2 wrote

Ah, another photo of the “male gaze” of a headless objectified woman.

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HolyNiar t1_ixi03hi wrote

Really liked the photo, nice pose by the model and overall a pretty interesting concept. Great Job, keep it Up🙏😊

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transtattoo t1_ixiqvi1 wrote

The lighting and film quality is fine, cropping/composition could be a lot better and the story of the photo feels uninspired. I can’t imagine what I’m supposed to feel when I see this other than maybe “huuuuhhh fruit woman sexy”. It’s reminiscent of the photography from men who hope their camera will get them laid. These type of men make art like they fuck- beckon you in with a promise of stimulation and only present you with their self-satisfaction, leaving the viewer empty-handed and their time wasted.

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magnelectro t1_ixk580u wrote

Ripe!

Ignore the haters. Art on...

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