Livinghhh-Cancel4181 OP t1_j2cbzs9 wrote on December 31, 2022 at 4:47 AM

Reply to comment by reggiedoinreggie in Any criticism please?, Artist Apu (me), Watercolor, 2022 by Livinghhh-Cancel4181

really? you dont think it’s already simplified enough?

reggiedoinreggie t1_j2ce37u wrote on December 31, 2022 at 5:05 AM

Yes, but contrasted with the super detailed hair it’s a bit jarring. I’d also just go with one shade rather than multiple. That being said just my 2 cents. Either way the piece is good

Livinghhh-Cancel4181 OP t1_j2ch9gp wrote on December 31, 2022 at 5:35 AM

i appreciate your insight, i’ll improve it next time