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Suspicious_Ad4705 t1_j2ehlkg wrote

I love this and I’d like to say I’m not an artist before I give my critiques

-buds left knee looks a lil off but it still looks great not sure how to animate it more -the ash of the cigarette is cylindrical like the cigarette itself and it holds a bit of texture -smoke from the mouth is lit but the smoke off the cigarette will be thicker and unaffected by the blowing of air out the lungs

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Livinghhh-Cancel4181 OP t1_j2ewoem wrote

thank u man, i didnt even notice that haha, im glad i posted it so others could point out what i cant

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