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SlothChunks t1_j910ke0 wrote

Man, this is just cringe. Not good.

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Repulsive_Mistake_53 t1_j91jyyu wrote

You try making something then, I bet this piece is far better than anything you could create

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cobrat1ger OP t1_j93fz7z wrote

what exactly is not working ?

how would u realize this concept ?

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SlothChunks t1_j94vc6i wrote

I think the general concept is too ridiculous. A woman with a halo, with relatively large butt and breasts, who is made of a metallic material is wearing a cloth like bikini? Jumps as if she needed to jump and do a somersault jump over some obstacle, when there is nothing that she need to jump over. When she hits the enemy queen the piece shatters in all directions for some reason.

I understand that all of this is subjective artistic vision and that there is no clear “correct” way to depict something like this but I still think this short animation is trying to do too many things at once and insert too many stylistic elements into one.

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cobrat1ger OP t1_j95huka wrote

but how would u do it ?

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SlothChunks t1_j9dsyyh wrote

Definitely no bikini and no halo. If she is some kind of robot that has a metallic surface then she wouldn’t care about wearing a bra and underwear.

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cobrat1ger OP t1_j9en5cs wrote

no hard feelings, but i find ur points weak

everything u said is subjective, i was hoping to get objective opinion on camera angle, animation, lighting etc

but saying that red is better than blue is not really working

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SlothChunks t1_j9jnvld wrote

Yes. I definitely do not claim my opinion is anything but a subjective opinion. I don’t think anybody can be “right” or “wrong” about art. We can just have feelings about it.

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