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Un1ball t1_j90om2a wrote

Bowling alley screen type of animation, very nice

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Ram_rider t1_j90fk60 wrote

Do an en passant animation next

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cobrat1ger OP t1_j90h694 wrote

haha I would try thy is actually a nice idea xD

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Flowrellik t1_j8zziik wrote

Oh yeah, that is definitely a queen 😏 Nice animation too :)

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subros4 t1_j91b0js wrote

love everything about this except the camera makes me dizzy. Sharp edges, shines and detail on the model and full b/w except the halo are top class, keep it up

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ApocalypseSpokesman t1_j8z8raz wrote

It appears to be a queen. It moves like a bishop, but there is already a white square bishop behind it.

It does appear to be checkmate, because the king can't move left or right, and it can't take the queen because of the bishop.

However, pawns don't usually break into little pieces like that. Normally they'd fall over screaming. Seems like the artist should know that.

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AlarmedEagle9027 t1_j900sbe wrote

Ok, really bad at chest here, but love to play anyway, queen can move like a bishop. In a linear way or diagonal, like a bishop.

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tobu_sculptor t1_j90q2kt wrote

>Ok, really bad at chest here

Luckily the artists isn't.

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sporesatemygoldfish t1_j91iz86 wrote

That is Fantastic!! halo and wavy ponytail are duly noted.

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cobrat1ger OP t1_j91md26 wrote

Thank u man, I'm glad it can resonate with u <3

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magicsurge t1_j91v40z wrote

It's checkmate tho, right?

If the king takes the queen, there's a bishop lined up to snipe him. Personally, I'd just let her Mortal Kombat me...

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dreadperson t1_j91yh8o wrote

CHECK - GET ABSOLUTELY FUCKED - MATE

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SlothChunks t1_j910ke0 wrote

Man, this is just cringe. Not good.

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Repulsive_Mistake_53 t1_j91jyyu wrote

You try making something then, I bet this piece is far better than anything you could create

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cobrat1ger OP t1_j93fz7z wrote

what exactly is not working ?

how would u realize this concept ?

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SlothChunks t1_j94vc6i wrote

I think the general concept is too ridiculous. A woman with a halo, with relatively large butt and breasts, who is made of a metallic material is wearing a cloth like bikini? Jumps as if she needed to jump and do a somersault jump over some obstacle, when there is nothing that she need to jump over. When she hits the enemy queen the piece shatters in all directions for some reason.

I understand that all of this is subjective artistic vision and that there is no clear “correct” way to depict something like this but I still think this short animation is trying to do too many things at once and insert too many stylistic elements into one.

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cobrat1ger OP t1_j95huka wrote

but how would u do it ?

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SlothChunks t1_j9dsyyh wrote

Definitely no bikini and no halo. If she is some kind of robot that has a metallic surface then she wouldn’t care about wearing a bra and underwear.

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cobrat1ger OP t1_j9en5cs wrote

no hard feelings, but i find ur points weak

everything u said is subjective, i was hoping to get objective opinion on camera angle, animation, lighting etc

but saying that red is better than blue is not really working

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SlothChunks t1_j9jnvld wrote

Yes. I definitely do not claim my opinion is anything but a subjective opinion. I don’t think anybody can be “right” or “wrong” about art. We can just have feelings about it.

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