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yugiyo t1_iws4hb3 wrote

Probably could have done with stacked exposures.

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trip_with_hari OP t1_iws6c4c wrote

Yes I agree I should have but this was totally unplanned and couldnt miss taking a shot and it came beautiful inspite of a single shot

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mattb2014 t1_iwsv4j5 wrote

And better composition

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yugiyo t1_iwsxsrd wrote

Well yeah, something so that the eye isn't immediately drawn to the magnificent rock face that is not in the picture.

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Ascurtis t1_iwtdy94 wrote

Yeah I'm not an expert but I feel like there's a little too much of the water in the foreground, and some wasted space where the clearing on the right is.

It is beautiful but I don't know if - maybe I feel like - it's just because that entire area is just naturally magnificent. My eyes sort of have a hard time finding a resting spot, and after being led down the stream, once the water curves out of view I feel like I'm zigzagging through the image, finally sort of settling on the rockface - not because I was led there or because it's what I find interesting but because my eyes need to rest, and my brain finds it to be a sort of neutral zone.

I'm not a photographer or artist, I mean I like to draw and paint and though I don't post, like, anything, I know I don't have a knack for real art so yes I'm talking out my arse, while kind of just trying to articulate my thoughts other than the obvious "nature is beautiful". That is true but I wish I were an artist and really wish I had the eyes for photography, so I could offer OP more than my hairbrained (at best, hypocritical at worst) attempt at constructively debriefing my experience viewing their work.

...nature is beautiful.

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