dbtng t1_j45gg7f wrote on January 13, 2023 at 8:01 AM

Reply to comment by ronin_khan in My free 100 page non-technical book about the impact of AI in society, employment, etc...feedback and collaborations welcome. We are in for a rough ride, but the destination is great by ronin_khan

You seem earnestly interested in producing the best book you can. Writing can be a painful process. Stick to the point. Use direct sentences and action verbs. Use examples to illustrate the concepts you introduce to your readers. And ... for the type of writing you are doing, source your opinions. Again, good luck. Climb that hill.

ronin_khan OP t1_j45h22w wrote on January 13, 2023 at 8:09 AM

Thanks man, yes, I am, and you can't imagine how much comments like yours help! It's painful, yes. You've done it too? If so link me to it, I am interested. Also, if you ever have the time to read more of the book and want to let me know more weaknesses of it, I am all ears. It's not nice when someone criticizes your work, but it's necessary. My work is not perfect but can be better with feedback like yours, if I am willing to leave my ego aside and listen.