After sixteen months of work, I held the first physical copy of my first book. [image]Submitted by Kristofmorrow t3_11nu8u3 in GetMotivated
Yarusenai t1_jbpk6yt wrote
Reply to comment by meatballsbonanza in After sixteen months of work, I held the first physical copy of my first book. [image] by Kristofmorrow
I think the same about the excerpt he wrote further up. It's unnecessarily verbose, so much that it really restricts the flow. He does say it's like that the entire time, which would turn me off immediately, but I am probably not the target audience. Good luck in either case!
Sovereign444 t1_jbpkwrd wrote
I agree, I mean I hate to be a spoilsport and I’m happy for him, but it seems unnecessarily overly complicated.
Kristofmorrow OP t1_jbplkxz wrote
It was written for those who love writers like Dickens and I appreciate your thoughtful words. Though what I wrote further up about Still Morrow is not a summary, it’s an excerpt from the book.
Yarusenai t1_jbpulpa wrote
Yes, that's what I meant; the excerpt. I corrected that.
Viewing a single comment thread. View all comments