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tdzangel t1_iqs6gi8 wrote

Did you have a specific audience in mind when writing this story?

Why the hell did you pick that as your title??

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[deleted] OP t1_iqs9dv7 wrote

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tdzangel t1_iqsdgko wrote

I applaud your creativity and the pure enthusiasm with which you've self-published, but maybe try out a test audience beforehand next time.

I'm sure you feel the title is pertinent to the story, but I'll be honest, it really does not sound appealing. If your goal is a passion project that's just for you, then great, but if you are hoping to market to a wider audience, test reads and market appeal are very important

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