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nu_nu_eden t1_iyem0e7 wrote

Don't ever try, to make it as a comedian. Does that read better

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Unrealdatboi t1_iyepfuz wrote

You don’t need a comma at all

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nu_nu_eden t1_iyeuis7 wrote

NONE. Like not ONE of you thought, maybe thats where i wanted the READER TO PAUSE

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nu_nu_eden t1_iyeue5g wrote

Lol jokes guys being grammatically OVER CORRECT ON A CASUAL SENTENCE COMPLETELY MISSING THE INTENTIONAL JOKE . go internet!!!! SAILOR MOON GO

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No-Information1255 t1_iyepik2 wrote

No it really doesn't. Why are you putting random commas in your sentences?

Here I'll fix it.

Don't ever try to make it as a teacher.

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