I'm gonna agree with the comment above. I'll add that tweaking the mix just a little bit could give a better sound; you can always suck people in by making them feel a little surrounded by the melody. You already did something cool with making the bass feel like it echoes a bit, I think letting that high-pitch melody get one good echo in time with the beat with a bit of pan would go a long way. Again, that wouldn't be groundbreaking, it's been done before, but it does work to suck people in if you do it just right.