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Nipie42 t1_je01kgy wrote

Don't take this as an attack at all, it's not (I don't even know if English is your first language) but you can use "they" instead of "he/she" and "sibling" instead of "sister/brother". I find generally it's quicker to write and smoother to read, but it's up to you of course.

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