corsicanguppy t1_iwfj6mp wrote
Reply to comment by gregorydgraham in Salt Lake City's city council voted in favor of a project to build a small community of tiny homes for people experiencing chronic homelessness! by Taintastic
I don't think no restrictions worked well in the past. They may work better in tiny homes which are fully detached and have that added noise barrier of no shared walls, but that may be rare and doesn't seem to be definitely the case here.
gregorydgraham t1_iwfpig8 wrote
“I don’t think” - this is weak, you need to pump it up with “only an idiot thinks”
“Worked well” - this is an obvious weasel word (albeit a compound one), avoid slipperiness with “worked at all”.
“They may work better” - this is both weak and weaselly. Try “they only ever work”
“But that may be rare and doesn’t seem to be definitely the case here” - Ay caramba! Do you kiss your girlfriend with those lips? Even “but I don’t think so” would’ve been better
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