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skyrimfireshout OP t1_j9xv6bo wrote

Reply to comment by Summutton in [WP] You inherit a mirror along with other items from your late mother. You find yourself gazing longer and losing a little bit more of yourself each time you pass it in the hall. You finally know why she took her life, but it still calls you... by skyrimfireshout

Even though I knew it was coming, the plot twist was amazing. That was very well written and better than I expected. Well done!

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Summutton t1_j9yirp4 wrote

Thank you! I went back and forth with two endings. Either

  1. Your life is a dream all along and what you thought was a dream is reality (one I chose obviously)

  2. When you look into a mirror you are connected to someone else far away. The character was supposed to feel guilt for how great her life is and how bad the child's life is and learns the mirror can give that child her life. (Way too much I would of had to add and it was already long enough)

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skyrimfireshout OP t1_j9zl9e3 wrote

Oh no you chose the perfect story line. In my head I was expecting the 2nd option so to read about the first was a good surprise. Good job!

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