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mdkubit OP t1_jdmo2fp wrote

This is a fantastic short. I loved every second of it, and it was the sort of idea that had popped into my head when I made this prompt. Very well done!

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justadimestorepoet t1_jdmp9bh wrote

Thank you! I grappled a bit with the shape of this story, but I really loved the prompt and wanted to make this sort of tragic tale of life in a dog-eat-dog society. One of the most compelling tales is that of the heart in conflict with itself, after all.

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