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AmbulatorySushi t1_jdiomqg wrote

Reply to comment by sadnesslaughs in [WP] Last week you found an old sword in a box. When the blade was unsheathed it spoke to you, recounting its history. It declared you bearer of the mythical talking sword of Babel, and that you are bound together until death. Unfortunately, the sword is incredibly irritating and won’t shut up. by DiRumgega

This is good! One small criticism, the hilt is the handle of the sword, I think the word you're looking for is sheathe. The sheathe is what the sword slides into to cover the blade.

Nice job though, I like the story.

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