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Glitchracer t1_jdxha57 wrote

Reply to comment by ColebladeX in [WP] You, a supervillain, are very confused as to why your superhero-nemesis is rampaging through your lair screaming something about you kidnapping their girlfriend. Meanwhile your daughter, who has come to visit you, seems very nervous and is anxious to leave your lair. by Kitty_Fuchs

It would be easier to read if broken up into paragraphs, and a little more attention to punctuation. The werewolf boyfriend aside was great, and I like the idea of a supervillain invested in his daughter’s life. Also that her SO is another girl.

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Tahxeol t1_jdxl7nm wrote

To add to this: depending on your device, pressing enter may not be enough to jump a line.

On my phone, I personally need to press it twice. There is a full empty line between those two paragraphs. Otherwise, it does this (Yes, I jumped three times, no, it doesn’t display beyond the editor)

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