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Time_Significance OP t1_jdq18k9 wrote

Reply to comment by EntertainmentEast614 in [WP] The heroes encounter a unicorn, a creature that will only take orders from a virgin. To everyone's surprise, the hero and the cleric were rejected. To everyone's bigger surprise, the unicorn trots over to the barbarian and puts its head on his lap. by Time_Significance

The dialogue was great, but it being a single big paragraph made it hard to follow.

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EntertainmentEast614 t1_jdq1fs1 wrote

Sorry, I had it spaced correctly but reddit decided that enter doesn't do anything, I've fixed it

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