Submitted by Firefighter-Salt t3_xsvxdh in WritingPrompts
Sky_Prio_r t1_iqq21gh wrote
Reply to comment by Sky_Prio_r in [WP] As an immortal you pass your time by switching between the roles of a hero and villain every couple centuries. Things get awkward as you lock your eyes with someone whom you tormented centuries ago now as the benevolent king of a prospering kingdom. by Firefighter-Salt
"My name is JACK! You forgot me?! Then after all your unadulterated cruelty you then have the disdain to become a 'benevolent' king? No, no I don't think so, I think you don't just get to, forget."
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"Ahh jack, all right, I'll give you what I did was cruel, but now I'm fairly certain now I am a kind king, all the people you'll hurt, my kingdom will prosper through kindness this time, I'm trying to repent."
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A bold faced lie, he almost figured it out, then it seems he came to the conclusion that he didn't care, now I knew many jacks, but this one was the closest anyone ever got to getting me, and honestly was the most entertained I'd been since, longest I can remember.
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It gets hard to remember things when your this old. I think you run out of space, what I did to him for his entertainment was, not worthy of what he had given me. He was racked, his arms and legs became eaten with rats, then his nerves were split one by one, he would not move a muscle and th...
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"Well damn you? What could you possibly be thinking about more important than this, right now, right here?"
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Ahh yes, he had a point, what should I do... Ah yes! the one thing I can do, let's try a kinder version of the roman candle party trick,
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Hey sorry this is so small, I got conscripted into helping my family clean the fridge while writing, then it took me a while to research, but tomorrow I hope to finish this, sorry for not doing that much in part two, it will be continued on the morrow!
ThatTubaGuy03 t1_ir3nivm wrote
But it was not continued on the morrow
Sky_Prio_r t1_ir3phe4 wrote
It's been saved as a draft lol, I got started but school started too, and sadly I haven't got the time, I really am trying to work on it though, sorry it's taking a while
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