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Crystal1501 OP t1_iu3lh3l wrote

Reply to comment by xroachyx in [WP] The government, fearful of vampires and looking for ways to keep people in line, introduced a form of punishment called 'The Human Farm'. The inmate would be handed off to the vampire community, and the vampires would keep them prisoner to harvest blood from. Typically used for life sentences. by Crystal1501

Looking forward to part 2! Since you were a bit drunk writing this, I'll gently point out that there are a few mistakes in the writing... I'm not normally that person, but normally people aren't tipsy XD anyway, good story and, as I said, I look forward to part 2!

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xroachyx t1_iu3lvzn wrote

If you're mentioning grammar mistakes, yes probably I did some :) English is not my main language :) Glad you liked the story :)

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Crystal1501 OP t1_iu3m9eg wrote

Didn't realise English wasn't your main language, I thought it happened just because you had one too many drinks XD considering that you managed to learn another language AT ALL, ESPECIALLY one with no consistent rules, I'll let the grammar slide (as I said I'm not normally that person anyway lol). Btw let me know when part 2 is up!

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xroachyx t1_iu3mrtg wrote

English is a really different language than Turkish, and also I was drunk, so you know :) Mistakes to be made lmao. I'll let you know when I write part 2 :)

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