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UntakenNameFtw t1_iuheh0a wrote

Reply to comment by UntakenNameFtw in [WP] You and your team failed in your mission, causing your lover to die while your team escape. You beg your friend who can time travel to save your lover but they break down, crying. "You have no idea how many times I've tried." by cool_whale02

Lmao I just realized after a certain point I mixed up Alex and Val reading this over. I'm sure this will confuse people. I don't know how to edit a message yet cause I'm new otherwise I would. Just be aware that Val is the one that can use time and teleport and fought up close with the wolf while Alex used gravity and protected Lia. So some of the actions where I mentioned Alex is actually not him but Val. Rooky mistake on my part. xD

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sane-writing t1_iuhzrqf wrote

below your message are multiple buttons (on pc): Reply, Share, Save, Edit, Follow and three dots. It's rather obvious there.

on mobile, there are just three dots below your message, in that menu there's a pen-symbol to edit your message.

And, as a personal suggestion (that's how I usually do it): Write your stuff in a text program, save it, wait a few hours. then, read it again, correct every mistake you can find. at that point I usually go to bed, proofread it again the next day, maybe make more corrections and post it afterwards.

obviously, that's only how i post my stories, my regular answers usually are a mess :-D

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UntakenNameFtw t1_iui0nbh wrote

Nice! Thanks for this. xD I'm to lazy to edit this now but I will definitely update this later today.

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