Submitted by AliciaWrites t3_yf0eaj in WritingPrompts
“Why not see which is brighter: Your aura or the sun?”
Happy Thursday writing friends!
We define aura as the distinctive atmosphere or quality that seems to surround and be generated by a person, thing, or place. So we're thinking about the presence of a person, thing, or place - the vibe we get, the energy they put out into the world. What do our characters give off? What are the consequences of it? Good words, all.
Please make sure you are aware of the ranking rules. They’re listed in the post below and in a linked wiki. The challenge is included every week!
Here's how Theme Thursday works:
- Use the tag [TT] when submitting prompts that match this week’s theme.
Theme Thursday Rules
- Leave one story or poem between 100 and 500 words as a top-level comment. Use wordcounter.net to check your word count.
- Deadline: 11:59 PM CST next Tuesday
- No serials or stories that have been written for another prompt or feature here on WP
- No previously written content
- Any stories not meeting these rules will be disqualified from rankings and will not be read at campfires
- Does your story not fit the Theme Thursday rules? You can post your story as a [PI] with your work when the TT post is 3 days old!
- Vote to help your favorites rise to the top of the ranks! I also post the form to submit votes for Theme Thursday winners on Discord every week! Join and get notified when the form is open for voting!
Theme Thursday Discussion Section:
- Discuss your thoughts on this week’s theme, or share your ideas for upcoming themes.
Campfire
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On Wednesdays we host two Theme Thursday Campfires on the Discord main voice lounge. Join us to read your story aloud, hear other stories, and have a blast discussing writing!
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Time: I’ll be there 7 pm CST and we’ll begin within about 15 minutes.
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Don’t worry about being late, just join! Don’t forget to sign up for a campfire slot on discord. If you don’t sign up, you won’t be put into the pre-set order and we can’t accommodate any time constraints. We don’t want you to miss out on outstanding feedback, so get to discord and use that
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There’s a Theme Thursday role on the Discord server, so make sure you grab that so you’re notified of all Theme Thursday-related news!
As a reminder to all of you writing for Theme Thursday: the interpretation is completely up to you! I love to share my thoughts on what the theme makes me think of but you are by no means bound to these ideas! I love when writers step outside their comfort zones or think outside the box, so take all my thoughts with a grain of salt if you had something entirely different in mind.
(This week’s quote by Richelle Mead)
Ranking Categories:
- Plot - Up to 50 points if the story makes sense
- Resolution - Up to 10 points if the story has an ending (not a cliffhanger)
- Grammar & Punctuation - Up to 10 points for spell checking
- Weekly Challenge - 25 points for not using the theme word - points off for uses of synonyms. The point of this is to exercise setting a scene, description, and characters without leaning on the definition. Not meeting the spirit of this challenge only hurts you!
- Actionable Feedback - 15 points for each story you give crit to, up to 30 points
- Nominations - 10 points for each nomination your story receives, no cap; 5 points for submitting nominations
- Ali’s Ranking - 50 points for first place, 40 points for second place, 30 points for third place, 20 points for fourth place, 10 points for fifth, plus regular nominations
Last week’s theme: Spooky
First by /u/OldBayJ*
Second by /u/nobodysgeese*
Third by /u/GingerQuill*
Crit Superstars:*
- /u/London-Roma-1980
- /u/Xacktar
- /u/DailyReaderAcPartner
- /u/FyeNite
*Crit superstars will now earn 1 crit cred on WPC!
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- Come check out our brand new feature on r/ShortStories to chat about all things writing: Roundtable Thursday
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London-Roma-1980 t1_iu5001o wrote
DING! End of Round 1. I return to my corner, staying standing to make a point. The champ keeps his eyes on me the whole time his cornerman talks to him. He never took a back step. He kept on me, forcing me to duck and dive. He gives the glare of a champion.
DING! End of Round 2. I take the seat on the stool and get some water. The champ listens intently to his cornerman while I hear encouragement from mine. His face remains pristine, without a trace of leather contact. I can feel something from when he bounced his fist off my gut.
DING! End of Round 3. His forearms have gotten between me and my target on every swing. The champ licks his lips. This is the round he dominates coming up. I can feel a spot under my right eye beginning to react.
DING! End of Round 4. I gladly sit down, as another 10 seconds may have been too many. The champ leans forward in his corner, ready to burst off the stool and continue landing his shots. My cornerman says his guard stays up a split-second too long, but I don't know if I'm strong enough to take advantage.
DING! End of Round 5. The doctor gives my right eye a cursory look, but I can still see through it. In the haze around me, I notice some sort of rub being applied to the champ's torso. Could it be? Did I get through his guard? If I did, the champ refuses to let me see the result of my work.
DING! End of Round 6. I stagger to the corner, still reeling from the eight-count I took a minute prior. The cornerman shows concern, but they say I'm good to go. The champ has his hands up even in the corner. Eighteen minutes and he looks fresh. How does he do it?
DING! End of Round 7. Vaseline goes over a cut on the champ's face. My right eye is swelling up, but I refuse medical attention. I can see the tiredness he has. I'm getting my third wind. For the first time in his career, in his reign, and for the first time in this fight, I'm not facing the champ. I'm facing a boxer. And I can beat a boxer.
DING! End of Round 8. The crowd is on its feet after a last-second exchange. I've gotten my eight-count back, and they can smell history. The champ is frustrated, his head down as he listens to strategy. I dare not get too confident; one uppercut could change the fight. But it could also change the world.
There would be no bell for Round 9. I didn't need one. Once I had broken down his confidence, his stare, and his swagger, all that was left was to break down a man. One-two and an uppercut! That was all! A shattered man lay on the canvas.
ALL HAIL THE NEW CHAMPION!!!
[WC: 499]