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Crystal1501 t1_iu00eol wrote

Reply to comment by [deleted] in [WP]No one know how the zombie virus began, but humanity is on the ropes. A powerful stranger cuts through the horde one night and reaches your compound's wall with a deal. Vampires are starving. Help feed them in exchange for protection from the other undead menace. by cesly1987

And now the sequel is out :) I knew he was planning a sequel, otherwise I would have said something haha

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BrunFer-Author t1_iu016st wrote

I'll take a read later, but the stylistic choice and purple prose issues will still be there, sadly.

That said, the vocabulary and sheer astonishing sentence construction is quite fantastic when it doesn't turn repulsively purple.

Good job writer(wo)man/person, you just gotta work on that flowery tone. We all gotta get better and you're sure as hell on the right path.

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