LifeBegins50 t1_itbbztz wrote on October 22, 2022 at 9:52 AM

Reply to comment by MermaidsHaveWifi in [WP] You have the ability to see people’s kill count on their head. You tell no one, managed to stay away from shady people and live a peaceful life. One day, your 5 years old kid’s number is not 0... by guitarist2505

I will admit that I guessed what had happened as soon as he said he had shared his candy with Daniel. That said this was well written!

MermaidsHaveWifi t1_itii3e3 wrote on October 23, 2022 at 9:59 PM

Well thank you! I figured it may be predictable, but I just couldn’t get over the plausibility of it. My after thought was to, after he said “I shared just like you taught me” for the mom to see a “one” above her head. Maybe I’ll be a little more creative next time. Thank you for the kind feedback!