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ArtemisiaFlower t1_iuh818j wrote

Reply to comment by ArtemisiaFlower in [WP] You find a binder filled to the brim with cards, playing or board game cards almost. You pick one up that reads 'Lesser Explosion' and accidentally drop it, a small firecracker like pop sounding from it's spot on the ground, the card completely fine despite the scorch marks now around it by Drop-Of-Jello

I'm not a native English speaker, so I'd appreciate it if anyone pointed out some mistakes and/or gave me advice on how to improve my writing.

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magestromx t1_iui8tsr wrote

Nah, it was a great fun to read. Check out my version if you want.

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Sk1mm3dM1lk t1_iuj5sbs wrote

It was a good read... The possibilities are endless (insert maniacal laughter)

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