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Unyx1 t1_it35dms wrote on October 20, 2022 at 4:22 PM

Reply to comment by Various_Character_45 in [WP] You are a shapeshifter and a young girl takes you home as her pet dog, you’ve been with her for years when she brings her new boyfriend home. He reeks of death and bad intentions. You try to warn her but she doesn’t listen, that is until he tries to harm her in front of you by HangoversKill

Amazing for a first time! I'll be excited to watch you improve!

Maximans t1_it37uew wrote on October 20, 2022 at 4:37 PM

I agree! I really liked the line “wasn’t talking to you.” Just perfect delivery. It takes guts to post on here, so thanks for sharing! I enjoyed it

Various_Character_45 t1_it39nyn wrote on October 20, 2022 at 4:49 PM

Thx so much, I was debating on posting it for a minute there