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TheB1de t1_itqpxwq wrote

Reply to comment by Surinical in [WP] Creature that hunts groups of humans, every person it kills will be forgotten by the rest, their actions attributed to another member of the group, but when there is only one person left, the changed memories make no sense, how can you help yourself gather wood? Why did you bring 5 backpacks? by Red580

Damn, that ending is good. Was expecting stories starting at the beginning with multiple people, but I like how this started with just the last person, and eventually no one.

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Surinical t1_itqsfvb wrote

Thank you. I liked the challenge of making it more and more clear to the reader she didn't start out alone as the story goes.

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