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ReadyDude3849 OP t1_itx50gm wrote

For your first story, this was great! This was exactly what I was hoping for when I wrote the prompt.

The text is definitely crammed, work on spacing lines out a bit so it’s easier to read.

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LuanTheKbush t1_itx5b3n wrote

Thank you! Nice knowing I got the vibe you were imagining👌. I’ll try to space better on the next ones if I get the confidence to write 😉

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