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bookworm1st t1_iu9icvq wrote

Reply to comment by Freedom41 in [WP] You want so badly to be a Hero. But your powers are, frankly, terrifying. Heroes struggle to trust you, and all the older Villains keep trying to mentor you. by pawpaw_git

I was outside however I knew that the villains would most likely accept me they have been trying to get me to join them it was going to be a long ride but… a few hours later I arrived as I walked in i was having second toughs but at this point it was too late to turn back.. ‘I w-would like to Join you all’ I said ‘well very good them I knew you would change your mind’ Said Viktor I was relived yet what would people think? Was I really a bad person? I had wasted so much on being a Hero to just give up and become a villain however my thoughts were interrupted, ‘You changes your mind too late little ‘hero’ cackled Medusa the leader of the villains I left and went home I was on my rooftoop when Cho went for a crash landing ‘no time to explain just help us’ please… she said with a fear in her expresión with a shaky voice

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Freedom41 t1_iu9vayn wrote

Nice!!!....this is very good actually, now the protagonist has a choice either help or don't.

If she helps, there is a possibility Cho might betray her later

or

She stays a villain.

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I am up for part 3 :D

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bookworm1st t1_iujzai7 wrote

I was shook at last all my dreams were coming true I didn’t think about it once and simply accepted ‘sure ‘ ‘great then ‘ said Cho as I walked onto the platform I saw the issue,skeleton warriors ‘we haven’t had these in years’ Said Cho ‘Well Im a daughter of hades it will be easy’ the rest of the hero team cheered and gave me more attention than ever it was a bit overwhelming ‘now guys we need a plan,don’t giver her that much attention she will er she will be overwhelmed! yeah overwhelmed!’ Said Cho little did I know there was jealousy in her voice after making a few plans ‘Hey ma’am don’t we need a co captain? In case you know di-‘ Said a hero ‘HOW dare you say that I mean yes um new girl I mean Lilith will be the co captain ‘ said Cho nervously once we went I had to concentrate very hard in order to do it when there were only 2 left I felt a push which made me lose complete concentration Cho.. she had pushed me off I was only hanging onto a 20 floor skyscraper with my fingers ‘Cho? Ma’am? Why did you push me a little help? I saw a slight grin appear on her face ‘Now daughter of Hades I SUMMONED THESE just to end you and all the little heroes ‘ said Cho malishly ‘I-I don’t understand wait Cho your a Crocotta !’ I gasped ‘How lovely you found out! And as you may know I’m a enemy of men of people of Heroes so you shall die starting off by you!’ She grabbed at me completely transformed I concentred as much as I could the 2 skeletons remaining attacked Cho however these skeletons may not be hungry for me but fir the rest of the heroes I made them go away ‘hey good job boss’ said a girl hero ‘Boss!?’ I said surprised ‘Yeah you were the co captain and Cho died so now your our captain Miss Lilith !’ I couldn’t believe I was younger than a lot of these heroes yet they called me Miss and treated me like a Hero they finally trusted me.. the daughter of Hades…. (Btw if you want stories of this protagonist let me know)

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