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UserMaatRe t1_iy9dpv3 wrote

Reply to comment by sufrt in [WP] Your Significant Other has landed a book publishing deal! You're very proud of them, even if you don't actually enjoy their writing. One day, on a whim, you buy an actual copy in a book store. It's nothing like the pages they gave you to read. Nothing. by veriverd

What is the terrible thing that causes fear and can not be explained by mundane reasons (like someone switching the book covers)

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sufrt t1_iy9f8zh wrote

Does it really have to be spelled out? It's heavily implied

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UserMaatRe t1_iybvhkq wrote

Please spell it out for me here in a reply, because I genuinely don't understand what you were going for, and am trying to help.

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EllipsisMark t1_iy9srtl wrote

You might need to... I don't know how to say it "Sharpen the implication?" I don't know. I didn't read it because formatting. It's just a wall of text. You need to double space your paragraphs.

Like this to make them drop lines.

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