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riles-s t1_ixnwi4k wrote

Reply to comment by wannawritesometimes in [WP] A single tear falls from your eye as your grip of the world fades. The embrace of death overtakes you, and memories of loved ones wash away buried regrets. You find yourself in a black void with giant floating text: "The demo has ended. Purchase a subscription for entry into the afterlife." by _foolishly

This is very clever. I really like how it seems the text is able to recognize thoughts rather than actual speech. That's something I had never thought of.

I also imagined this person retaining their physical body in this place, but I think their consciousness existing here instead is a very cool idea!

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