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Luminous_Lead t1_ivo9zh7 wrote

Reply to comment by GrunkleStanwhich in [WP] "You fool!" cackled the Dark One, "No man can kill me!" "But I am no man!" bellowed the hero, as he unhinged his jaw. A grotesque sound filled the hall as they hacked up impossibly large balls of cloth. Unfurling, they stand and announce "For we are actually three trench coats in a halfling!" by Breadinator

Loved it. The middle was a little weak, in particularly the point where it ceases to become spoken dialogue and becomes inner monologue without any indication, but the ending was really sharp.

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