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Bozzie0 t1_ixtq0ub wrote

The story is about two men. Just wanted to point that out, because there's no need to change that back to he & she. Great story by the way OP, don't say that you suck at writing romance.

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mcherm t1_ixtuwp0 wrote

>The story is about two men.

Where did you get that? I thought the narrator's gender was carefully unspecified.

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riverrats2000 t1_ixtwbzk wrote

They probably got it from >To many people, I'm just that hot dude on the beach.

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mcherm t1_ixtxg85 wrote

Thanks -- I'd totally missed that!

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ursulazsenya t1_ixtwidc wrote

“To many people I’m just that hot dude on the beach”

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mcherm t1_ixtxgjc wrote

Thanks -- I'd totally missed that!

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The5Virtues t1_ixuh48b wrote

So it is! That’s what I get for reading while half asleep.

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