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propixelchicken t1_iwylgoj wrote

As an scp fan I always like seeing shit like this but I feel like you fell into the "To Many Black Bars" problem here. Non of the sentences give any information all the crutial parts are censored. At the end it sadly felt like I read nothing. I like the twist at the end tho. "THEY DO NO COME IN PEACE" LOL

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crazykid080 t1_iwzdpx2 wrote

Yeah, if I spent more than 5 minutes in the back of a truck coming up with this I would have tried to add more instead of relying on the secrecy. I don't think I'll revisit it just because it's already posted, but hey, I'm happy with it. Plus who knows what the other 5000+ races are lol

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