Submitted by throwthisoneintrash t3_ys9slv in WritingPrompts
bookworm271 t1_iw84hdo wrote
Reply to comment by armageddon_20xx in [CW] Follow Me Friday - Elevator by throwthisoneintrash
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"Come, we'll show you your lodgings!" one of the creatures said.
Amelia considered. "If you insist, but I'll need to leave soon."
"You may leave whenever you like. "
Amelia is led through the winding passages to a door marked 15. The room was massive and ornately decorated. "I guess I could do one night, " Amelia agreed.
That evening she enjoyed a delicious meal delivered to her room and one of the best night's sleep of her life.
When she awoke, she asked for directions back to her apartment. Her host looked crestfallen. "You may leave whenever you like, but we'd hoped you'd stay longer. Have you tried our spa?"
"I'd love to, but my job -"
"Our concierge service produces doctor's notes."
Amelia grinned, "in that case..."
And so she stayed one night, and another. After a week, she was having difficulty recalling details of her apartment.
One morning a rabbit appeared at her door, saying payment was due. His fur was pale pink. Before Amelia could explain she was unaware of charges, the rabbit bit into her arm, drinking blood, and memories of the elevator flooded back.
The rabbit stepped back, its fur now a deep red. "Payment accepted."
"I want to go home!"
"You can leave whenever you'd like, but perhaps you'd like a last visit to the spa first?"
Amelia's head felt fuzzy. Why was her arm bloody? She smiled, "Alright."
The next night Amelia had an odd dream. She was in an apartment lobby, and a new resident was moving in. With horror, Amelia recognized the place. She rushed forward, "Don't take the elevator!" she warned the newcomer.
Amelia awoke fightened. A nightmare! About an elevator and...she shook her head, and rang for room service to bring breakfast. Resort 517 was home.
WC: 295
armageddon_20xx t1_iw93bvm wrote
I LOVE this! I had no idea how anyone would end it, but this is just awesome. Definitely got “Hotel California” vibes.
bookworm271 t1_iw9dfuy wrote
Thank you! You had a great middle. I didn't think of Hotel California, but I saw "resort" and "blood red fur" in your middle and knew I could work with that.
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