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stopusingredditnerd t1_j1ginj2 wrote

"Time changes us all" wow that was a great main idea for the audience to hold on to the back of their minds as a start to your story. Big events in our lives can really radically change our core foundations, either for the better or for the worse. Great opening for any apocalyptic setting.

I also liked the first person view narrative, felt real and the main character seemed very likeable to keep the reader invested into reading more. Good job man 👍