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WillCuddle4Food t1_j0oy6a1 wrote

Reply to comment by WillCuddle4Food in [WP] You are a warlock who has formed a pact with a powerful demon. The times that you summon your demon are the only solace they receive from a long and brutal war that rages within their home plane. by lordhelmos

Just a heads up, this is my first submission ever. Constructive feedback is greatly appreciated.

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Chryses90 t1_j0p09xl wrote

Thoroughly enjoyed it! I especially liked the elegant writing in contrast to the sudden and down to earth 'Best of luck' and WTF. Also, kudos for the infernal metaphor - stuff like this is the reason I visit this sub.

So please do us all a favor, and keep writing

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WillCuddle4Food t1_j0p0t6e wrote

First, happy cake day. Second, thank you! I will definitely keep my eyes peeled for more prompts that inspire me. I appreciate the positive feedback.

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russrussrussrussruss t1_j0pf9tx wrote

Fellow amateur here, this is great! I never would have guessed this was your first submission, keep it up! I also posted here, feel free to give it a read.

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