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Nesious t1_j0sd4of wrote

Reply to comment by Nesious in [WP] You are a warlock who has formed a pact with a powerful demon. The times that you summon your demon are the only solace they receive from a long and brutal war that rages within their home plane. by lordhelmos

I was thinking of those friendships we hold for so long that we forget many of the moments that they were built upon to begin with. Or at least I do with my garbage memory :P. I had an idea for how I'd do the beginning of the story (the summoning) as well, but at 4 AM I just wanted to get out the important bits of what I was thinking about.

It may be a touch too dramatic and have awkward word choice, but as someone who really never writes and barely reads nowadays I had a good time so big thanks to OP and such ^-^.

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ApprehensivePen t1_j0stw5q wrote

I liked it more than mine! You should write more.

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Nesious t1_j0t3xgh wrote

Oh thank you! I have a really hard time thinking of compelling characters and settings myself, so I really needed a good story to build off of <3

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Jacky1111111 t1_j0spwdy wrote

Dude this was good and the dramiticness is fitting so don't worry about that but god this was amazing. Thank you for writer it brother made my night I appreciate it so much

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Nesious t1_j0sq9o5 wrote

Aww thanks <3 glad you enjoyed it!

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Jacky1111111 t1_j0srymw wrote

Do you have any other things that you've written that I could read?

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Nesious t1_j0stcy5 wrote

Sadly no! Frankly I've never written a story for anything except assignments in high school English years ago, so this was rather out of character for me :P.

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Jacky1111111 t1_j0sttoy wrote

Well if you ever write anything again try to remember to give me a shout I'd happily read it for ya

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