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Shadowman761 t1_j1seji0 wrote

Reply to comment by Enigma1984 in [WP] You died and awoke in the afterlife. It's quite nice actually. The people and atmosphere are a lot nicer than you are used to and there is no stress or pressure. When you ask what good deed got you into heaven you are informed that this is hell, followed by a visit from a very concerned demon. by Kitty_Fuchs

Damn, thats a good story! Id be happy to read a second part!

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Enigma1984 t1_j1shxcq wrote

Thanks very much. I guess I thought it would work quite nicely as a one shot story but as I got to the end it felt a bit rushed, maybe another part would let it breathe. I might follow up a little on the theology (though it would probably be a lot like The Great Divorce) or expand a bit on the protaganists sad realisation if I get time.

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