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Sillygirl292 t1_j1tptn1 wrote

The Demon looked some what as how I was told they would look. Horns, sharp teeth, cloven hooves with hairy goat legs. Though this one was wearing a button-up white shirt with a blue blazer. He had blue eyes, unlike the dead black ones. I was told demons have. His eyes looked tired, and his black hair, which looked soft and curley, was dishevelled. " Hi there... My name is Tobias B Demon... you can call me Toby if you like." he held out a clawed hand and not wanting to piss off a Demon. I shook it. His hand felt so much softer than I thought. He begins talking again " as you have been informed this is Hell" I look around shocked " really...I thought it would be more...fire and brimstone" Toby sighs " thats just a lie spread around by those winged assholes up there in the clouds and their followers down on earth. No, we do things very differently here... we punish only those who can never be forgiven. " I look at him confused." Those who can not be forgiven?" Tobias pulls a small clock out of his pocket." I'll explain later.. right now, we better go and get the paperwork started. Please follow me.

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Sillygirl292 t1_j1va25m wrote

I follow Toby until we get to a black taxi cab. A faceless man is driving the cab.. I get scared and step back, Toby just rolls his eyes. " he won't hurt you his face is that way as it's his punishment." I climb into the cab and can not take my eyes off the man.." What did he do to get that kind of punishment?" I Whisper ask Toby.

The man replies in a kind but tired voice." I was vain in life so vain I ended up bullying people and calling them ugly and thinking myself better than everyone else because of how I looked, I died on the operating table getting another unnecessary surgery...as my punishment no one but me can see my face, to others I'm faceless" Toby smiles at the man " that's right but being vain is not a unforgivable sin...for this sin the person will work off their sin for a set amount of time..how long do you have left Frank...1000 years ? " 957 years left to go," says the taxi driver. I look at them, both confused. " But why a taxi driver? " I ask. Toby gets an annoyed look on his face. " The l sinner does not choose the kind of job he must do to work off their sins, but most of the time, the sinner is assigned to help a Demon..in this case Frank is my driver"

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