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Misterwright123 t1_j0ps2vu wrote

In Jamestown there is no crime. When the residents reach the age of 18 they go to the town hall, a large building where you can find statues of muscular men and women. They choose a power from a select list of powers.

Manuel was greatly disappointed when he saw that he had only 1 power to choose. He knew what that meant: With the power to fly he would have to do the job of being a weather balloon. 2 years later he is fed up being a weather balloon. He is telling his wife Rylie, who with superhuman strength and a superintellect is working in the construction industry that he is going to go to Eastontown where the council of superpowers is located and tell them that his power is shit and he will stop doing the job of being a weather balloon.

"Fine" she said while leaning on a table which has a tablecloth in a red white checkered pattern. And so Manuel spent the rest of his days unemployed and he never even flew again due to being upset of having been a weather balloon.

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WriterKatze t1_j0ruf23 wrote

That kinda is, how it would go down if everyone would have a superpower! I don't know why you are downvoted. I loved it. Take my upvote!

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Rou2_Rambo t1_j0rshci wrote

dk why this is down voted, people on here have standards that are higher than they should be.

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CK1ing t1_j0rwkyz wrote

Yeah, the wording could use some work but the concept is on point

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