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RespondBorn6248 t1_j2auoxh wrote

ok so you repeat paragraphs

change THE FUCKING GENDER of the murderer

and then call them the good guy

wow

ok

this fucking stank

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Janus-Moth OP t1_j2cdyst wrote

What did he write?

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RespondBorn6248 t1_j2d40yp wrote

he changed the prince to princess at the end

murdered women and children then said the now "princess" was in the right because she wanted to scare the nobility, AFTER HE FUCKING SLIT HIS FATHERS THROAT TO TEST THE SHARPNESS OF THE SWORD

basically it was a forced villain was always good story, fucking shit

absolutely worst fucking story ive ever read on this sight.

also he fucking copy pasted half of the story to make it look longer.

fucking worst shit ive seen, I CANNOT EMPATHISE HOW MUCH I HATE THAT.

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Nimbuscloud009 t1_j2dye73 wrote

I reposted the story above. I had a formatting mistake. Let’s see your story lmao. I’ll wait.

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