Darkorvit t1_j2bzpig wrote
Reply to comment by EndorDerDragonKing in [WP] There are two types of rebels in the world. Young, plucky heroes with a prophecy and plot armor, and grim faced, dirt streaked insurgents with old Soviet guns and handmade explosives. The problem comes when these two groups team up. by turtle-tot
Dude why y'all want more? It ain't that good
EndorDerDragonKing t1_j2bzutj wrote
Because ya wrote sumn intriguing
Darkorvit t1_j2c0maq wrote
I have less plot than george lucas when he had to explain why darth vader was designed like he was
SuperPotatoThrow t1_j2cp033 wrote
Yah well that there was some damn good writting. Decent short term plot, good formating and character development was on point just within a couple of paragraphs. Keep it up, without a doubt a novel of some kind is in the works.
EndorDerDragonKing t1_j2c20h5 wrote
Make sumn up then :p
RealHonest-Ish_352 t1_j2e5dx6 wrote
It's a mystery though, well done.
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