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Darkorvit t1_j2bzpig wrote

Reply to comment by EndorDerDragonKing in [WP] There are two types of rebels in the world. Young, plucky heroes with a prophecy and plot armor, and grim faced, dirt streaked insurgents with old Soviet guns and handmade explosives. The problem comes when these two groups team up. by turtle-tot

Dude why y'all want more? It ain't that good

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EndorDerDragonKing t1_j2bzutj wrote

Because ya wrote sumn intriguing

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Darkorvit t1_j2c0maq wrote

I have less plot than george lucas when he had to explain why darth vader was designed like he was

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SuperPotatoThrow t1_j2cp033 wrote

Yah well that there was some damn good writting. Decent short term plot, good formating and character development was on point just within a couple of paragraphs. Keep it up, without a doubt a novel of some kind is in the works.

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