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Federal_Penalty5832 t1_j5c3ljd wrote

"Time Traveler's Dilemma"

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In a world of endless space and time,

A patient came to me, a troubled mind.

He claimed to be a traveler from the past,

Sent to destroy the cause of humanity's last.

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But every test I gave, it all came back clear,

His mind was sound, without a trace of fear.

And yet he swore, with utmost conviction,

That he had lived through history's collision.

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I listened with a curious ear,

To tales of war and pain and fear.

He spoke of futures dark and grim,

And how he worked to change the paradigm.

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But what is real, and what is not,

In this mind that's caught in thought?

Is he a savior, or just insane,

Lost in a world of grief and pain?

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I can't say for sure, but one thing's true,

His story's captured my imagination too.

And in the end, that's all that matters,

The tales we tell, and how they scatter.

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In the mind of this patient, lost in time,

A tale unfolds, both true and sublime.

Though it may not be fact, it's worth the retelling,

A hero's journey, a story worth dwelling.

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Life-Raspberry-5076 t1_j5i3ewo wrote

I really enjoyed the story portrayed through brevity. The rhythm is very catchy and song-like.

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