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flintoxicated OP t1_j6ntaac wrote

Reply to comment by Local-Program404 in [WP]A vampire that selectively targets drug dealers and criminals because they know those people would be easy targets that wont warrant an investigation is confused to find out that the people of the city believe them to be some sort of vigilante that is ridding the city of crime. by flintoxicated

Very nicely done!
A lot of personality in the text and a clever way to describe the bloodsucking character. Also you manage to put quite a lot of information in a very short amount of time.
And The spiderman reference is very well done too x3

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Local-Program404 t1_j6obh2s wrote

Thank you. I was afraid using JJ would be too ham-fisted at first but went ahead to write it and id revise it as needed. Turned out just fine with the pacing and added a lot of voice.

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