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[deleted] t1_j6o18jq wrote

Reply to comment by Raging_Flames10 in [WP]A vampire that selectively targets drug dealers and criminals because they know those people would be easy targets that wont warrant an investigation is confused to find out that the people of the city believe them to be some sort of vigilante that is ridding the city of crime. by flintoxicated

I love that you took the first person here and how you angled it at the close not only touching on the vampire's morality and purpose but also the essentiality of his being- the efficacy of it all!

At least to me.

Awesome!

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Raging_Flames10 t1_j6oj02g wrote

Thank you. I felt the first person would help me capture his motivations in a story more easily and skip past describing the scene and environment etc, which I am not good at.

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[deleted] t1_j6pcfrv wrote

Scene descriptions... I'm the worst at it. That is why I'm here: perhaps to learn from others.

I don't like solitary writing, and I really enjoy reading the work of others- even on Reddit!

Cheers

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