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[deleted] t1_j4zwhbg wrote

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Goat_To_Space OP t1_j4zwyg7 wrote

Neat poem. You've got the talent for it, though we recommend reading up on poetic meter and alternative rhyming schemes.

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HaikuBotStalksMe t1_j53iu35 wrote

Why did the poem trigger people?

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Goat_To_Space OP t1_j56ng89 wrote

It triggering people wasn't the issue, but the sub rules say poems need to be tagged [POEM]. If you repost it with that tag it'll probably be fine.

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