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shiver23 t1_j601kah wrote

Reply to comment by Skyblade12 in [WP] Your superpower isn’t anything special. You can make stuff disappear behind your back then pull it back out again. When a friend at a party asks you to do it to them it sounds like a great laugh. But when you pull them back out they look older, disheveled, and are frantic to be sent back. by A_GOOD_NINJA

This one hit me somewhere emotionally and I really appreciate your talent.

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Skyblade12 t1_j61fkbz wrote

Thanks. I don’t write a lot, and don’t have much faith in my own writing (especially dialogue). Already see plenty of stuff I feel like needs to be edited here. But at least people are appreciating the core of it.

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