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Commander_Night_17 t1_j5k7y61 wrote

Reply to comment by [deleted] in [WP] For ages the dragons & humans coexisted. Humanity waged war amongst themselves & built sprawling empires. Eventually the dragons tired of it & unleashed their furry. Humanities conquests came to a halt & became enslaved by the dragons to build grandiose castles befitting their new masters. by [deleted]

I did write a short bit rn

Prolly reads out terribly, but I'm sick and my mind is addled

Hope you'll likr it

Do tell if i should try and write a full story

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[deleted] OP t1_j5rwpfx wrote

it's definitely a good start with interesting ideas. Good attention to detail on how it's all still fresh in the dragons minds while generations of humans have passed. The addition of elves sounds like a good idea, are humans inferior to elves or vice-versa? Maybe add an inferior race of dragons such a wyverns. Maybe dragons have their own infighting unbeknownst to humans.

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Commander_Night_17 t1_j5slyo5 wrote

So

Try to write a full story?

(I was going to include Kobaliods if I got better)

Thanks for your advice

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[deleted] OP t1_j5ziugu wrote

Yes I think you should and if you need feedback on a particular idea you have I'll do my best to provide some (or if you just want random ideas)

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Commander_Night_17 t1_j622k7i wrote

Well thanks I'll be sure to inform you on any story I need feedback on

As for now, I'm having a bit of a creative block, so any ideas you or any of the readers have for this story or any story, I'd appreciate it

(I mainly am a amateur fantasy writer, part of the reason I'm having creative block is because I've written to many dragon storied)

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